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Zhanna Yurchuk

798 days ago
Unfiled. Edited by Lucinda Clutterbuck , Tatjana Jevdjic , Zhanna Yurchuk 798 days ago
  • Where are our taped body on the map?
  • Courtyard (внутренний дворик)?
  • Grove (роща)?
 
 
  • The visitor was a young doctor. He was from Iceland. He came first to America for a medical conference. He didn't speak English very well and really shied this fact. But he was very inquisitive. At the New York Film Festival he was invited by a friend on Facebook, whom he met for the first time. She was a young active girl. At some point she moved away from him to catch up with friends. And he went to look around.  He held a glass of champagne in hands. At this point he discovered the body.
Tatjana J
  • I like this Lucinda's imagination!
Lucinda C
  • The user is Dealcantara a 19 year old South American IoT Specialist attracted to the event because he is into IoT. His childhood was traumatic he has seen his parents murdered in front of him. He has no cultural reference in which to place Sherlock Holmes and he is not a story teller. He is with his friends from the same culture and he does not speak English very well. He places his objects to reflect his own experience. He does not realise that Sherlock Holmes is quite old fashioned and proper. He likes Dexter and watches it on TV sometimes. The placement of his objects is interpreted by a 50 year old documentary film maker as sexist brutal and offensive. A bad argument breaks out and several young Sherlockians dressed in Orange suits come to break up the quarrel. They manage to calm everyone down but Dealcantara is confused. He goes home to his small flat drinks half a bottle of Vodka and cries himself to sleep.
 
Tatjana J I think that cloud info can be anything, measuring feelings - like is the person under some stress, elated, sad, nervous.. Cloud can send clues about the objects in a form of various sounds, pictures, photos. Cloud can send social media votes -- like how many likes something or someone has, or directions, or faults, mistakes, errors, paths.. I suggest that we name that thing just CLOUD and give it several roles on our sheet. So we won't mind where is our body. It has to be on the green area. They said if it rains, they'll move the body. So it doesn't matter. What matters is how someone reacts to our objects. Does it intrigues him? Is it interesting enough. User might be personalized -- I vote for Lucinda's person -- totally unique. 
Cloud is all - periscope, messages, measuring, directing, redirecting ..
So besides visitor, there should be another big note -- CLOUD. And we could explain it.
Does it makes sense?
As creators of this "murder game" we should be aware of people who participate in this game, and who has some psychological problems - and who are free to come and to play this kind of game. As an ordinary participant we can not influence behaviors of various people -- that should be subject for further exploration.
 
Zhanna Y I find the creative process difficult . I'm a programmer and so I used to structure and organize all, but creative process is chaotic. Therefor when I am working at assignments, I can feel the blocks in my mind. I don't always understand what my classmates to do. I see that the creative process is going. But since we are working all asynchronously, it is difficult to work coordinated. Anyway it is a very interesting experience.
 
805 days ago
Unfiled. Edited by Lucinda Clutterbuck , Zhanna Yurchuk 805 days ago
100 Questions Lucinda's 2nd draft
 
  1. Are the walls Thin?
  1. Is it a  demountable in a caravan park
  • like
  1.  Is the victim a worker in the planation?
  • no
  1. Is the victim a womaniser?
  1. Is the victim a Baby boomer/ digital immigrant?
Lucinda C
  • like Cos she is sixty so definitely digital immigra
  • no
  1. Is the victim a woman, landlady, in her 60s
  1. Did the murdered woman, make a fortune in South America, have a husband from Latin America and make modest living by her diligence?
  1.  Is HEINRICH Spreckels  an enemy of the woman?
  1. Is the Woman, the victim a Stasi spy?
  1. Is the victim  ELEONORA Adler, from Eastern Germany? 
 
Tatjana J
  •  // Yes, and her name in this story should be some other, until revelation her true identity.
  1. Did she reveal to the Stasi that the killer’s son Ebner,a famous violinist, wanted to flee from Eastern Germany during the cold war, but he was arrested and later killed in a camp?
Tatjana J
  • yes, but that is to be revealed
  1. Is the story hilarious with much room for comedy?
  1.  The sleuth her is a digital immigrant?she smoke a  pipe with Cuban tobacco, with orange hair, red cheeks, and green eyes in her 50s, with asymmetric cady skirt
  1. Are the sleuth's scientific ways up with things which by now we find completely normal?
  • Didn't understand question
  1. Did she, like a blind chicken, by chance discover something, although sometimes her grey cells are working properly?
  1. Is there a boy/girl? A girl/boy or a sprite or a nonspecific gender from a parallel universe?
  1. Because of his digital blunderings is he is unwittingly a part of act himself?
Zhanna Y
  • Didn't understand question
  1. Yes and sometimes she makes stupid mistakes, like confuse evidences, but luckily it solves like by itself?
  1. Is the musician killed, because he prevented all sleep, playing the exact same melody all time?
  • he could be killed because he annoyed people playing always same notes
  1.  Is the killer pushed to murder by a dishonest and cruel boss who exploits the workers?  
  1. Is it the natural state of things, even on this plantation?
Lucinda C
  • yes but this is superflous
  1. If they are  constructing a bridge is corruption syphoning money and wages away from the workers?
  • like
  1. Is the activist killed to shut him her up?
  1. Is it a Crime of passion?
Tatjana J
  • all crimes are crimes of some sort of passion
Lucinda C
  • crime of passion. n. a defendant's excuse for committing a crime due to sudden anger or heartbreak, in order to eliminate the element of "premeditation"
  1. Is the motive envy? because the victim worked well, was polite and women liked him? 
  • like, passion + envy
  1. Does the killer wanted to hide the truth about his past?
Tatjana J
  • actually, both were hiding their past
  1.  Did the victim tell everybody about the truth of the killer's past?
Zhanna Y
  • maybe, he/she begun carefully asking questions
  1. In the state of effect, because the victim traveled a lot, played the violin well and talked constantly about it all the time? 
  • This is similar with above questions
  1. Was the victim the leading actor in the theatre and was killed by an actor who wanted to take his place? 
  • like
  1. Was the violin that was found the famous Stradivarius, that the killer’s son Ebner played in the Maxim-Gorki-Theater ?
  • like
  1. Was the violin stolen after Ebner was killed?
  • Is this secret of our killer!?!
  1. Was the Violin  placed at the victim's feet
Tatjana J
  •  violin should be placed as though the victim had been  going to play it
...
805 days ago
Unfiled. Edited by Tatjana Jevdjic , Lucinda Clutterbuck , Zhanna Yurchuk 805 days ago
  • Location Setting Characters Motive
 
WHERE
Lucinda C Location
Tatjana J
  • Was it a rural area? yes
 Was it  barn?
  1. Was the house is located in Africa among a small tribe? 
  1. Is this a temporary home for workers on the construction of a large object like a bridge? 
  1. Is this house in the settlement of the sect?
  1. Is it the victim’s estate near Buckfastleigh- Devon, United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buckfastleigh
  1. Is it a holiday house in Queensland Australia?
  1. Is the climate Warm?
Zhanna Y
  • why not
  1. Are the walls Thin?
  1. Is it a  demountable in a caravan park?
  1. Is there a beach nearby?
  • yes
  1. Is it a South American, apple plantation?
  • like
  1.  Is it an African planation?
Setting
Characters
  1.  Is the victim a courier?
  1.  Is the victim a worker in the planation?
Tatjana J
  • it might be
  1.  Is the victim Sir Aldus Cuddlepomp: Adventurer, collector of rare fabrics, former aspiring violinist, notorious anti-communist crusader, failed owner of several craft beer breweries, amateur massage therapist,  semi-successful owner of 3 moving companies?
  1. Is the victim a womanizer?
  • like
  1. Is the victim a Baby boomer/ digital immigrant?
  • like Cos she is sixty so definitely digital immigrant
  1. Is the victim a scientist who explored a small tribe in Africa. His whole life was devoted to the research. Mostly he lived in Africa in the tribe. And only recently he returned home. He settled in the guest house of friend?
  • no
  1. Is the victim a woman, landlady, in her 60s
  1. Did the murdered woman, make a fortune in South America, have a husband from Latin America and make modest living by her diligence?
  1.  Is HEINRICH Spreckels  an enemy of the woman?
  • like
  1. Is the Woman, the victim a Stasi spy?
  • like
  1. Is the victim  Gabriela Castro, from South America
  • like, but she has another name here
Lucinda C
  • Ok so what name? Can you change it?
Tatjana J
  • some south american -- like spanish name Gabriela Castro
  •  // Yes, and her name in this story should be some other, until revelation her true identity.
  1. Did she reveal to the Stasi that the killer’s son Ebner,a famous violinist, wanted to flee from Eastern Germany during the cold war, but he was arrested and later killed in a camp?
  • yes, but that is to be revealed
Lucinda C
  •  yes and  can you explain what the 
Tatjana J
  • Stasi was something like SS units during WWII, but made in "freedom" -- people were spying each other, even member from the same family were spying each other. Friends too -- it was very ugly, and very possible. It was organized network of spies, like 30% of population were spies (I do not know exact number, but it was a huge number) .And it was made because Eastern Berlin was under SSSR control, with idea to keep it like that. So Berlin wall was colorful  with graffitis on the West, and plain on the side of the Eastern Berlin. Our victim was a successful spy in the Eastern Berlin, modest, working as a schoolteacher, but with plans on her own -- to flee but in elegant way, with a money
  1. Is the sleuth her/himself is a digital immigrant?
  1. Yes and it should be she.
  • like
  1.  Is the story hilarious with much room for comedy?
  • like
  1. Does she smoke a  pipe with Cuban tobacco, with orange hair, red cheeks, and green eyes in her 50s, with asymmetric cady skirt
  • like
  1. Are the sleuth's scientific ways up with things which by now we find completely normal?
  1. Did she, like a blind chicken, by chance discover something, although sometimes her grey cells are working properly?
  • like
 
  1. Is there a boy/girl? A girl/boy or a sprite or a nonspecific gender from a parallel universe?
  1. Because of his digital blunderings is he is unwittingly a part of act himself?
  • like
  1. Yes and sometimes she makes stupid mistakes, like confuse evidences, but luckily it solves like by itself?
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830 days ago
Unfiled. Edited by Zhanna Yurchuk 830 days ago
Zhanna Y OBJECT: Violin
 
Lance W Object Logline
Zhanna Y Sherlock, in a moment of reflection, played the violin. The sounds and the tempo of the music conveyed his thoughts and mood.
 
Lance W Collaborator
 
 
Lance W Visual Reference
 
 
 
Lance W Original Sherlock Holmes source 
 
Zhanna Y A Study In Scarlet, page 45
 
"I was certainly feeling very weary, so I obeyed his injunction. I left Holmes seated in front of the smouldering fire, and long into the watches of the night I heard the low, melancholy wailings of his violin, and knew that he was still pondering over the strange problem which he had set himself to unravel."
 
 
 
Lance W 5 x why
 
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